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deepu · 2018-09-17T18:00:23+00:00

Kya ada kya nakhre tere paro o paro

munna219777 · 2018-09-17T18:16:43+00:00

AshishKaul · 2018-09-19T19:11:36+00:00

If interested you can read the fiction I have written on dardickaul.blogspot.com and give your expert opinions on how to improve

I am a novice writer so don't mind bad language and funny use of punctuation Mark lol

ashindia · 2018-09-19T20:31:51+00:00

Dard dick ?

karansh · 2018-09-20T01:19:40+00:00

Hard would have been better.

AshishKaul · 2018-09-20T02:00:37+00:00

Dardic is a language family of Kashmir and north Pakistan . Kaul is me @ashindia

usaindia · 2018-09-20T03:22:46+00:00

where is the kid

AshishKaul · 2018-09-20T03:31:18+00:00

@karansh better ? Are you replying to me

If yes then where is it lacking ? Structure , language , plot ?

@usaindia replying to me ?

Deb_Ban · 2018-09-20T04:43:21+00:00

Yo, @ArsenalFan700 , long time no hear!

AshishKaul · 2018-09-20T11:58:06+00:00

lol I just realised the meaning of lol reactions

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