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deepu
Somaliya
1621 Points
September 2018
Kya ada kya nakhre tere paro o paro
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munna219777
28557 Points
September 2018
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AshishKaul
Ancient India
1127 Points
September 2018
If interested you can read the fiction I have written on dardickaul.blogspot.com and give your expert opinions on how to improve
I am a novice writer so don't mind bad language and funny use of punctuation Mark lol
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ashindia
9512 Points
September 2018
Dard dick ?
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karansh
542 Points
September 2018
Hard would have been better.
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AshishKaul
Ancient India
1127 Points
September 2018
Dardic is a language family of Kashmir and north Pakistan . Kaul is me
@ashindia
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usaindia
1671 Points
September 2018
where is the kid
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AshishKaul
Ancient India
1127 Points
September 2018
@karansh
better ? Are you replying to me
If yes then where is it lacking ? Structure , language , plot ?
@usaindia
replying to me ?
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Deb_Ban
10114 Points
September 2018
Yo,
@ArsenalFan700
, long time no hear!
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AshishKaul
Ancient India
1127 Points
September 2018
lol I just realised the meaning of lol reactions
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I am a novice writer so don't mind bad language and funny use of punctuation Mark lol
If yes then where is it lacking ? Structure , language , plot ?
@usaindia replying to me ?